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Some people say it’s a waste of time when plan for future.It’s more important to focus on present.Do you agree or disagree?

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From the perspective of some individuals
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Accept space
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it is considered that planning for
future
Suggestion
the future
 is only time consuming
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and living the moment is more essential.While it can be true for other people to some extent
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I completely disagree with
this
 statement.
First
 of all
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I am of the opinion that if there is not any motivation
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people can find life boring.I mean that planning for
future
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the future
 and having a desire about something can incentivize people for life.People may try to improve themselves and do their work as perfect as they can in order to implement their plan
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,
and
this
 may help them to make their lifestyle more colourful. 114
Additionally
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Accept space
,
having regular plans and targets can
also
 be very beneficial for people in terms of
consantrating
make denser, stronger, or purer
concentrating
 on present.
For instance
,
Accept space
,
if people have a plan for
future
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Accept space
,
it means that they
also
 have an incentive for living and enjoying everything
,
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,
because
,
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,
in
this
 case
,
Accept space
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they can feel responsible for the moment and
future
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the future
.It can
also
 teach them using their time correctly and allot time
everthing
all things
everything
 regularly.82 Taking everything into consideration
,
Accept space
,
my view is that having a plan for
future
Suggestion
the future
 can
also
 help to
live
go away from a place
leave
 and
consantrate
make denser, stronger, or purer
concentrate
concentrates
 on present.It is
undoubtadly
without doubt; certainly
undoubtedly
 true that a combination of them would benefit people in order to gain success for the mentioned reasons above.

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