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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than in the past which reduces their activity levels accordingly. Why is this the case?

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Over the
last
 few d
ecades increased
Accept comma addition
decades, increased
the rate of children who spend all of the
day
 in front of the
TV
. The majority of y
oung generation
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the young generation
p
refer
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prefers
sitting at home by spending their
time
 for watching television
instead
 of doing outdoor activities,
this
 global problem cause an effect on c
hild’s development.
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the child’s development
a child’s development
 In the
first
 place, nowadays
TV
 programs overcrowded by interesting and knowledgeable programs and cartoons, which can be interesting for children. All programs scheduled and kids can spend h
ole
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the whole day
the hole day
day
 by watching cartoons and movies. It would be difficult for children leaving
TV
, because
day
 by
day
 they can enjoy of watching their f
avorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
cartoons. Actually,
TV
 c
onsist
Suggestion
consists
of different t
ips
a subdivision of a particular kind of thing
types
of channels as Disney, because of
this
 they can find a lot of reasons for watching television.
On the other hand
, spending a plenty of
time
 at home and watching
TV
 problematic for children, because of
this
 p
arents
Suggestion
parent
try to find the solution and how to teach them to control their
time
, because they should play games, study. Children’s
time
 should to be scheduled because they d
eveloping
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are developing
develop
and opening n
ew door
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new doors
a new door
for life, they learn how to live, the reason of
this
 they should limit their
TV
time
. Children c
an to do
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can do
physical activities, read books and enjoy their free
time
, because in the future they will do a lot of h
ome works.
Suggestion
homework
homeworks
 To sum up, children can watch
TV
, but they should control that
time
.
Firstly
, parents should to be concentrated on their development and health after which their entertainment.

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