In many Countries , the amount of crime is increasing . What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The present world is encountering many problems that afflict not only our young generation, but
also
affect
overall socio-economic condition
Suggestion
the overall socioeconomic condition
overall socioeconomic condition
overall socioeconomic conditions
of a country. One of the major problems is
crime
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a crime
the crime
which is increasing all over the world.
However
, an analysis
on
Suggestion
of
the consequences of
such
crisis reveals the need for certain steps to put an end to
this
social disorder. The causes of
crime
are really grave. There are a huge number of causes behind increasing the amount of
crime
.
First
of all, though Bangladesh is a small country, she has a huge population.
As a result
, the number of unemployments is increasing gradually which is mainly pushing the young generation to commit
crime
.
Secondly
, drug addiction is
also
responsible for
crime
in our country.
Thirdly
, the poverty which is
also
considered one of the major causes of committing
crime
. At
this
moment, it is important that our
government
take
Suggestion
takes
immediate steps to solve
this
problem.
Firstly
, the
government
has to form an
organisation
that will monitor all activities focused salving
this
problem. The
organisation
ought to conduct a survey to define the causes of
this
crisis and its extent in our society.
Then
it should help the
government
to develop strategies and laws to control the criminals and the police who responsible to control the
crime
.
Besides
, the
organisation
has to provide support services, for examples
;
Accept space
;
counselling, training and skill development, employment and self employment, follow up support etc.
To rehabilitates
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Rehabilitating
the criminals in our society.
Furthermore
, the
organisation
ought to create mass awareness against
crime
and its effect. Comprehensive advertisements and promotion programmes through media
such
as radio, Television
,
Accept space
,
social media, newspaper, billboards etc. And mess education scheme
such
as school, College, community clubs will create a mass social movement.
Hence
,
Accept space
,
with the integrated effects of the
government
, the
organisation
and the mass people, we will be able to control
crime
in out society in the long run. In conclusion, our
government
should make an efficacious plan to implement these precautionary measures as soon as possible.

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