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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#country #language
As a result
 of living in a
country
 is to speak foreign
language
this
 may cause some problems to communicate with origin people of that
country
 as well as practical difficulties.
Firstly
, Immigration have its own difficulties
.
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.
 The major problem is talking in different
languange
a systematic means of communicating by the use of sounds or conventional symbols
language
languages
 and learning that. People can solve
this
 by going to
language
 classes in their home
country
 before coming to another
country
 or they can use new technical translators that can record their voice and it translates automatically
.
Accept space
.
secondly
Suggestion
Secondly
, speaking a foreign
language
 may have a lot of great
impacts
Suggestion
impact
 on the people
such
 as preventing
alzeihmer
 or other brain diseases. They can learn new culture, environments and behaviours. To conclude,
although
 learning and speaking a foreign
language
 may be hard at
first
 and cause
problems but
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problems, but
 from the researches we know that
approxemately
(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct
approximately
 all the people who immigrate to a new
country
 learn its
language
 in one or two years.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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