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Some universities deduct marks from students' works if given in late, what are your views?

Nowadays, some universities are deducting marks from
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students'
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 issue has been drawing the attention from the public. Some people believe that deducting marks from
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a student's work
the student's work
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 and other mental problems, while others hold a view that there is no relationship between the marks and the
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. In my opinion, marks
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a student's work
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work
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 due to the social and psychological reasons.
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 and foremost, it has been argued that the social reason is why I think marks
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negative impacts
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the negative impacts
 must be considered, I still reckon that marks
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, a well-known American philosopher once said, 'Students generally prefer to get more marks'. It
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thus clearly indicates
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 clearly indicating that marks
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a student's work
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, another important factor that must be considered is that the psychological reason. As far as society is concerned, students always aim to score more marks.
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, a recent public article released by The Economist reveals that 80% of students are willing to score more marks though they have given their
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 in late. It is clearly indicating that marks
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a student's work
the student's work
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influence
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 their life. In the conclusion, I still hold a view on students that they deserve their marks though they are late. To address
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 issue, people and the government should make a concerted effort to resolve it.

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