Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and to keep it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that people who are career - oriented from a young age may spend their whole lives with that
job
. In my personal view, I think
this
may work for some people, while others have their own way to make them feel satisfied about their jobs. On the one hand, making a decision about
career
Suggestion
the career
a career
is good. Most people have dream jobs when they were young and they have more time to find out about those jobs, what subjects they should study and how to complete their goals,...
This
will help them gain more experience in their jobs in order to meet the needs of that particular working environment.
For example
, few young people or children are interested in becoming a pilot because it is really a difficult
job
. When they were young, they studied and found information about pilots, they focused on subjects which are related to aviation. They had to go to the academy, got relevant qualifications and took rigorous training. With the knowledge they have learned, they will easily pass the tests to become a successful pilot.
On the other hand
, some people find their
job
satisfaction
Suggestion
satisfying
in different ways. They do not spend their whole lives on one
job but
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job, but
instead
, they try to experience different careers to realize which
job
is suitable for them. And some of them do not matter what the
job
is, they just care about the working environment.
For example
, a friendly working condition and not high salary
is
Suggestion
are
better than a dull one and quite high salary.
Although
the salary is not very high, they just need to have fun and always be optimistic at work
.
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.
In conclusion, getting a
job
for your whole life may bring
satisfaction but
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satisfaction, but
I think it is not the only way to feel happiness in your career.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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