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It is generally believed that some people

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are

born with certain talents,

for instance

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for sport or music, and others are not.

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, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or

musician

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a musician

. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is alleged that a certain part of people

has

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have

congenital advantages like talent in some

fileds

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fields

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, example music, sport – but

rest

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the rest

of the people are not. People in the opposite position defend that any child can be slap- up musician or

sportman

someone who engages in sports

sportsman

sportsmen

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essay

Esau

assay

agrees that success in any field requires long- term planning and effort,

beacuse

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by working hard we can achieve the goals that we put our minds to.

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essay will discuss both

point

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points

of view. Some people believed that our personalities and abilities are determined mainly by genetics, we were born with any talents that come

form

a giver or sender

from

our parents. People claimed that a little sparkle in person which make you more

succesful

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successful

certain field

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certain fields

a certain field

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, Mozart had congenital

abilites

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abilities

to be

musician

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a musician

the musician

that comes from his father and grandfather

therefore

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he could give a concert in his 5. People who defend

opposite opinion

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an opposite opinion

said that human beings are not limited by their genetic

charateristic

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characteristic

and

upbrings

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up brings

and we can shape our

abilites

the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment

abilities

and successes.

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idea to people make people

demotivate

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and convince them they have already

start

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started

life behind. If we want to give an example, Einstein`s memory was very weak and he forgot anything easily, even though he was author of difficult to remember formulas. In

coclusion

a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration

conclusion

, to be slap- up specialist in any field does not matter you are

telented

endowed with talent or talents

talented

or not, it depends your personality and diligence. We all have

same abilites

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the same abilities

same abilities

, the main issue

that is

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can find and improve them.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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307 words

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