Environmental problem such as pollution and climate variations are increasing now days. The government have taken measures at global level but they got only few solution. why is it so? and how can this problem be solved?

It is generally believed that some people
ar
a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
born with certain talents,
for instance
for sport or music, and others are not.
However
, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or
musician
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a musician
. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. It is alleged that a certain part of people
has
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have
congenital advantages like talent in some
fileds
a piece of land cleared of trees and usually enclosed
fields
files
, example music, sport – but
rest
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the rest
of the people are not. People in the opposite position defend that any child can be slap- up musician or
sportman
someone who engages in sports
sportsman
sportsmen
.
This
esay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
Esau
assay
agrees that success in any field requires long- term planning and effort,
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of
this
by working hard we can achieve the goals that we put our minds to.
This
essay will discuss both
point
Suggestion
points
of view. Some people believed that our personalities and abilities are determined mainly by genetics, we were born with any talents that come
form
a giver or sender
from
our parents. People claimed that a little sparkle in person which make you more
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
in
certain field
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certain fields
a certain field
.
For example
, Mozart had congenital
abilites
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
to be
musician
Suggestion
a musician
the musician
that comes from his father and grandfather
therefore
he could give a concert in his 5. People who defend
opposite opinion
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an opposite opinion
said that human beings are not limited by their genetic
charateristic
a prominent attribute or aspect of something
characteristic
and
upbrings
Suggestion
up brings
and we can shape our
abilites
the quality of being able to perform; a quality that permits or facilitates achievement or accomplishment
abilities
and successes.
Introducuing
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Introducing
this
idea to people make people
demotivate
and convince them they have already
start
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started
life behind. If we want to give an example, Einstein`s memory was very weak and he forgot anything easily, even though he was author of difficult to remember formulas. In
coclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
, to be slap- up specialist in any field does not matter you are
telented
endowed with talent or talents
talented
or not, it depends your personality and diligence. We all have
same abilites
Suggestion
the same abilities
same abilities
, the main issue
that is
can find and improve them.

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