The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. what are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

In recent days, the
population
of numerous nations rising and the
problem
of increase of public faced at worldwide. The two major causes happened due to overpopulation like as, scarcity and unemployment.
Also
think that
this
problem
is severe for humans.
To begin
with, Few
nation people
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nation, people
have some superstition for
having a more children and few believe
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believing a more children and few
having a more children and few believe
that one boy should have as a child. So, they
can not
can not
cannot
control on birth rate.
Moreover
, uneducated people have not aware
from
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of
this
condition. The thinking ability of their is lower rather than another.
For example
, the
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
nation people
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nation, people
believe in two
child
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children
, perhaps
That is
why the
population
of
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
is around 123
carore
move while supporting, either in a vehicle or in one's hands or on one's body
carries
which is highest in the world. Another reason for that, people should migrate to the
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
country, which have already a
highest
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high
higher
population
. I deem that the
problem
of
population
is dangerous for human and it gives numerous consequences to the human's life.
First
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The first problem
problem
of these
issue
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issues
, numerous of
student graduate
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student, graduate
from the University and the company have limited vacancy for them.
That is
why, they have not their desired jobs which is
happened
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happening
because of
population
.
Secondly
, the land for farming are converting to the building. So that
,
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,
farmers grow
food
in limited space The
food
is
quitly
with low volume
quietly
lower than the total number of people live in the world
.
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.
Hence
, the price of
food
is increasing
,
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,
the poor people should not afford expensive
food so, they
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food, so they
suffer from the scarcity issue. To conclude,
population
is considerate
problem
for worldwide and it increases day by day
.
Accept space
.
There are numerous consequences which are faced by the human.
However
, if people become aware
from
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of
this
situation so, we
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situation, so we
can easily solve
this
problem
.

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