The chart below show the expenditure on study from 2000 to 2100

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the

amount

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of

hours

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spent by

undergraduates

,

postgraduates

, and

overall

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student population in a British university.

Overall

, the vast majority of

undergraduates

and all

students

spend 1 to 7

hours

to study

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in the library.

By contrast

, the number of

postgraduates

using 15

hours

or over accounted for the highest percentage. Looking

the

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chart in more

details

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,

undergraduates

usually consume 1 to below 7

hours

in the library, with the figure at approximately 63%, higher than the figure of

postgraduates

(17%) and all

students

(50%). The largest number of

postgraduates

(51%) spend

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a lot of

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hours

to study

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at the university library, between 15

hours

and more, compared to 15% and 9% of the proportion for all

students

and

undergraduates

individually. It is

also

noticeable that the period of 8 to 14

hours

is the

second

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35% for all

students

,

while

the proportion of

undergraduates

and

postgraduates

are

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slightly lower, accounting for around 28% and roughly 32% respectively.