The graph gives information about drinking habits of the US population by age. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph represents
percentage
of usage ethanol Add an article
the percentage
is
divided into four subgroups; heavy Unnecessary verb
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drinker
, Light Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
drinker
, ex-Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
drinker
and never drinker
by ages in the U.S. A glance at the graphs reveals that the younger Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
population
tends to alcoholism more than older people. In addition
, the
almost half of Correct article usage
apply
population
never drinks Correct article usage
the population
in
all ages.
It can be seen clearly that the Change preposition
at
population
of 25-54 years old attend to more drinking than the rest of them. Usage of alcohol has been just over the %40 all this
Correct determiner usage
these
ages
. Particularly, the highest heavy Fix the agreement mistake
age
drinker
age is 45-54 year
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years
olds
. Correct your spelling
old
However
, after the age of fifty-five, the proportion of drinking habit was significantly
fall, Change the adverb
significant
while
the number of never drinker
slightly decreases. Fix the agreement mistake
drinkers
In contrast
, the population
of ex-drinkers increase as total
trend of Add an article
the total
a total
never drinkers
.
In conclusion, the percentage of ethanol users Add a hyphen
never-drinkers
are
decreasing Correct subject-verb agreement
is
according to
growing age. But, a minority of the population
prefers to drink ethanol one of which does not escape heavy drinker
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drinkers
in
%5.Change preposition
apply
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