The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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, with the exception of Germany, produce marginally more than they consume. The two top Use synonyms
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China produced and consumed the most, at 5,398 billion and 5,322 Use synonyms
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nearest country in terms of both statistics was the US, where residents consumed 3,866 kilowatts an hour and produced slightly more at 4,099.
Russian lead the rest of the nations with 1,057 (in Linking Words
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). India and Canada ranked 5th and 6th with India producing 871 Use synonyms
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Canada was slightly lower in both (618.9 and 499.9 Linking Words
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