The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The chart illustrates electricity
consumption
and production
in the top ten highest countries
in 2014. It is clear from the chart that all countries
, with the exception of Germany, produce marginally more than they consume. The two top countries
, the United States and particularly China, were strong outliers while
the remaining countries
had similar numbers and lagged far behind in both production
and consumption
.
China produced and consumed the most, at 5,398 billion and 5,322 kWh
, respectively. The next
nearest country in terms of both statistics was the US, where residents consumed 3,866 kilowatts an hour and produced slightly more at 4,099.
Russian lead the rest of the nations with 1,057 (in production
) and 1,038 kWh
(expenditure) followed by Japan (936.2 for production
and 856.7 kWh
for consumption
). India and Canada ranked 5th and 6th with India producing 871 kWh
and consuming 698.8 while
Canada was slightly lower in both (618.9 and 499.9 kWh
). In the 7th and 8th spots were France (producing 561.2 kWh
and consuming 462.9) and Brazil, which recorded numbers in
530.7 and 455.8 for Change preposition
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production
and consumption
, respectively. In the final two positions were Germany and the Republic of Korea with Germany having higher production
that
Korea (526.6 to 485.1 Correct word choice
than
kWh
) as well as
consumption
(582.5 kWh
compared with 449.5).Submitted by pnuphuong05 on
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