The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, between 2000 and 2010. Summarize information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows information about the amount of money which was earned by three bakeries in London, over a ten-year period between 2000 and 2010.

Overall

, what stands out from

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is that there were considerable upward trends in the

income

of both Bernie’s and Robbie’s Bakery,

while

the

earning

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of Lovely Loaves saw a considerable fall over the period in question. Another interesting point is that Lovely Loaves was the most popular bakery in 2000

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but in 2010. Robbie’s Bakery earned more money than the others. Looking at the details, as regards Bernie’s Buns,

income

started at 20,000

euros

in 2000,

then

there was a fluctuation over the

next

three years, at which point it

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off at just under 40.000

euros

until 2006.

Then

the figure went up significantly, finishing at around 55.000

euros

in the first half of the decade,

income

then

rose sharply, reaching approximately 100.000

euros

in 2008. There was

then

a gradual rise to around 105.000 until 2010.

By contrast

, the

income

of Lovely Loaves went in the opposite direction. Taking fluctuated around 90.000

euros

until 2004. After that , despite falling sharply to just over 40.000

euros

in 2008, the figure

then

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off in the

last

two years.