Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. others say that there are more important environmental problems. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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contemporary era, there are myriad of environmental problems emerge. Society is polarized into two groups. Some people deem that the most predominant trouble is extinction of some flora and fauna. Whereas, some individuals believe that other problem like

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is more pivotal than plants and creatures.

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time Paramount reason of the loss of plants and animals is that they are giving some food products as well as other resources. To elaborate it, plethora of plants ar

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, Milk products and other things are provided us by animals.

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, in my opinion, extinction of plants and animals are major environmental problems.

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Topic Vocabulary:

biodiversity
extinction
habitat loss
ecosystem
food chain
imbalance
interconnected
climate change
pollution
personal actions
policy changes
education
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