Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the

ways educating

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ways, educating

children which have been received argument, especially,

parent

think

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thinks

that children should be allowed to make decision about their daily activities like choosing the food, what to wear or how they entertain since it develop their sense of

independent

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independence

but

other

any of various alternatives; some other

another

part debate that

this

opinions

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opinion

is

gain

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gaining

more harmful than the benefit because it make children become more selfish. Both

view

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views

of

this

matter will be discussed in

this

essay. The

first

thing should be mentioned is whether the children should be free to decide their basic things. When the children in grown up stage, they need to learn how not to depend on their

parent

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parents

in many daily tasks. That means

at

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in

this

period of a

children

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child

, they will develop the

habit including

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habit, including

the in depend habit and

this

is the label to support them to self- study and work more effectively in their future life. Addition to that,

this

is

the good

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the best

type of teaching children of the parents and it will help them to balance work and family. It is difficult to always take care of their

child

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children

in the simple things like choosing clothes, the children need to form their character and style when they start to take pride

on

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in

their appearance because it increase their

creative

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creativity

and it

also

prevent them bother their

parent

when they are working, which is a good side of

this

trend. On

another hand

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the other hand

other hand

, the matter has caused a heated debate since some people believe that allow their infant to free decide is the terrible idea.

This

attitude

contrast

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contrasts

dramatically with the discussion

above but

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above, but

it makes sense. Children need the attention and protection of their

parent

in playing game since it will harm their eyes and

this

is

also

affected on their study if they always keep eyes on the screen which of television or computer.

Furthermore

, it will lead to making children fall in the bad person’s trap if their

parent

gives them freedom. When they are allowed to go anywhere or playing with bad friends, they are the most susceptible target for many crimes like kidnap or being seduced to cut the class and they might break the law. Take everything in conclusion, both aspects have

the good

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better

the best

attitudes but

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attitudes, but

we

can not

can not

cannot

deny the role of dependent in most

children

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child

life. If the

parent

can use

this

education way in right way, their kids will grow up perfectly.