It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance; for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes clamined that any children can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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One of the controversial issues today is whether some people have special talents by genetics or they can be taught to become good at anything

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as sports and music. In

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essay, I am going to examine both views and give my own opinion on the matter. On one side of the argument, there are people who believe that some individuals are born with a specific ability. That can be being good at football, playing a guitar, or drawing outstanding pictures.

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, if we look at a successful musician, it is often seen that their parents or other members of their family are musicians as well.

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case is the most powerful reason why some people think talent is a heritage and it is inherited genetically.

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, it is

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possible for some people to believe that talents are shaped by training. Those people are mostly the ones who experienced building an ability from scratch.

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, even if someone doesn't have a family member who played basketball, it is still possible for them to practice from an early age until they are good enough to be called as talented.

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, it is common for parents to teach their kids what they are interested in themselves.

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might lead to a misunderstanding about being born with it or being taught. In conclusion, both arguments have their merits.

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, I tend to believe that, with the needed amount of training, any children can be successful at what they like.

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It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance; for sports or music and others are not. However, it is sometimes clamined that any children can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Parents can punish their children when they do something wrong, agree or not?

n1) Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

in some countries, younger people are neglecting their right to vote. what problems does this cause and what are some of possible solutions?

Some people think everyone should be a vegtarian , becouse we do not need to eat meat to stay helthy . To waht extent do you agree or disagree