Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in our life. Which do you consider to be the major influence?

Now a

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day

it is

debatable matter

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a debatable matter

that whether an individual’s

personality

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is acquired genetically or developed by the experiences offered by life. In my opinion, lifetime experiences

plays

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play

a greater role than the genes in a person’s development.

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and foremost, everyone goes through many phases in their life in which some are

easiest

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easier

and few are toughest as well, as we know that the situation and time never stay same, people grow, they experience and

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they learn.

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, when I was a

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by nature I was very introvert but after moving to

hostel

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a hostel

the hostel

for my higher studies there with

interacting lot

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an interesting lot

an interacting lot

of girls and

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I was transformed into

more sociable person

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a more sociable person

the more sociable person

. So, I believe that environment and surroundings play a major role in developing and it totally influence everyone.

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, the hard work, dedication and the positivity of the surrounding

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impact on individual’s

personality

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. To exemplify,

child

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of successful doctor will surely

turns

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turn

into a successful doctor as well.

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,

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the life

of an individual has a positive and negative impact on his

personality

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and development. Another reason to support my viewpoint, the genes transmit information from generation to generation and they do play a role in shaping the

personality

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and appearance of the

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child but

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child, but

later after

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later, after

growing up it is not necessary that will turn same as their parents after growing as a teenager.

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- a

child

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given birth by dwarf couple will

also

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be

dwarf but

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a dwarf, but

a dwarf but

dwarfs but

later after

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later, after

growing up

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the motion

and the anger of the

child

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will not be same as his parents. To conclude, inborn characteristic may have some influence on the

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child but

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child, but

after growing up they learn a lot from the experiences and the environment in which they are raised.