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Some people prefer to work for a large company. Others prefer to work for a small company. Which one would you prefer?

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The issue whether working for a large
company
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 is better than working in
small
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a small company
small companies
company
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 is
controversial one
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a controversial one
the controversial one
. From my everyday experience and observation, I think that both the points has its own pros and cons. In
this
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 essay I will give my opinion with reasons. To start with, working with a large
company
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 brings many benefits
such
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 as, higher salary, more opportunities, better experience which will useful for future, medical benefit
for
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to
 the employer and his family. Often, working in big companies
will gives
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will give
 a person less stress and more relaxation because each department has its own organization which is
handles
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handled
 by different people.
Secondly
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, working in a large
company
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 will
built
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build
 up so much confidence of the employers which will be beneficial for them in their future to get promotion and
also
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, while changing
company
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 for the jobs.
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, chances of promotion
will be reduce
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will be reduced
, as one’s the manager’s does lot changes job other cannot get promoted basically no requirement for the higher post. Afterwards,
mangers
someone who controls resources and expenditures
managers
 of large
company
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does not pay
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do not pay
 much attention on the problem of employee who are working on small post.
On the other hand
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, people who work in small
company
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 have more chance to get
promotion
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a promotion
 and increment.
Furthermore
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, they can talk to their
owner
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owners
 about the changes and the improvements which can be done in order to get more profit.
Besides
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, employee gets
less salary
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a less salary
 and poor medical benefits. All in all,
what
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what's
 been discussed above, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
 that it’s a
person
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person's
 choice and experience that in which
company
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 he or she work and in what situation they have joined the
company
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • corporate culture
  • hierarchy
  • marketability
  • professional development
  • entrepreneurial
  • autonomy
  • networking
  • prestigious
  • job security
  • scale of operations
  • benefits package
  • research and development
  • innovation
  • professional networking
  • career advancement
  • organizational structure
  • flatter hierarchy
  • versatile skill set
  • benefits
  • work-life balance
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