Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think education will not work.

In
this
present scenario, the demand for quick
food
is exponentially rising in the public. Now a day scientist recognises that most of the people harm their health by eating unlimited
junk
food
. A fair amount of people believe that the solution to
this
cause is to separate
education
among the people where as some others think that it is not usable. In my opinion,
education
will not work in
this
field. To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the
education
will not help to aware the people about
junk
food
.
Firstly
, the most indispensable reason is it that nowadays peoples are busy with their hectic schedules so that's why they are not even have enough time to prepare
food
at
home
. Do educated people give more preference to to quick
food
so that's why
education
will not help the people to understand that
junk
food
is not good for their health.
However
the
junk
food
is
also
available easily at cheaper prices so that's why I was can
also
buy it easily and nowadays it's demand was burgeon. To illustrate, there are various restaurants which provide free services and
home
delivery by which the people can order
food
at
home
like Zomato, Dominos and many others.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
,
furthermore
the oily
food
is not bad, but it's limit of eating is most important, like now nowadays youngsters prefer to eat
junk
food
daily which is one of the main reason for the obesity. The
food
which is sale on the street is not good hygienic, so people should make it at
home
. To conclude, in my opinion the
education
doesn't work to aware people about the spicy
food
. The quick
food
is not bad, but the limit to eat is the most crucial thing and the people should eat twice in a month for any festivals or an occasion.
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