Some people think that zoos are cruel and all the zoos should be closed. However, other think that zoos are useful to protect rare animals. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

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this

planet, but in

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recent time,

wildlife

is in a fight for survival. Certain people are considered that

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ue to harsh environments. While others find that, with the help of zoos rare species can be pr

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preserved

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and point,

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are

he best way to guard rare animals.

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essay will discuss both the point and give a logical conclusion. On the one hand, there are many merits fo

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of

aving zoos. The primary benefit is that, it can serve as a practical knowledge for human beings to explore many different wild an

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animal

pecies

such

as birds, mammals, reptiles and fishes all in the one place. To see them lively, folk gain immense knowledge about

wildlife

by observing them closely.

Furthermore

, many rare breeds that could get proper care in the zoos just be

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for the reason that; on account of

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ost zo

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eceive professional training before they work in the

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animal's

animal

ood, diets and their routine. Apart from

this

, if an

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any, animals

ave diseases, zoos can treat them immediately with the help of veterinary doctors.

Hence

, rare animals can be better protected under

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earnest and conscientious activity intended to do or accomplish something

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On the other hand

, there are some demerits for

wildlife

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keep

n the zoos. As the wild animals need suitable natural

environment

, which they will not get in the

zoo

area. To explain

this

, wild animals are happier in their natural habitats, th

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hey can leave by freely roaming around the forest as well as feel the various se

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Also, they

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eing around with other animals in the forest.

In addition

, some animals need special

environment

to live

such

as penguins and polar bear.

As a result

,

such

kind of special animal died in the

zoo

because of inappropriate living

environment

.

For instance

, most polar bears spend their entire lives on the sea ice, so they ca

n not f

can not

cannot

eel better in the

zoo

. In my perspective, zoological place should not be closed just because of they can protect endangered animals.

However

, I think that, government should spend some budget to make zo

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an animal

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the animal

an stay comfortably. To conclude, with the lively

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environment, wildlife

wildlife

can easily survive at

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the zoo

a zoo

Even rare species guard by the

zoo

is beneficial for future population to enhance their practical views.