Write about the following topic: Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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These days, computers

play

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are playing

an essential role in our society. Some people think that ones are the most vital innovation of the

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decades. While others believe other inventions are of more importance. In my opinion, I completely agree that the computers become crucial electronic device. The

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reason, date system of computers can store a great amount of documents without wasting the storage space as a manual way of writing.

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, students can use the computer to find or register to borrow books in

library

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the library

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way is more convenient and we will not spend much time

statisticing

a mathematician who specializes in statistics

statistician

the number of books that have been borrowed.

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reason above, they are programed a powerful

tools

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tool

which

assist

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assists

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performing intensive human labour or

mundance

found in the ordinary course of events

mundane

tasks

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as calculating,

analyzing

consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning

analysing

date and

manging

be successful; achieve a goal

managing

various systems, and copying texts.

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, the computers enhance our efficiency substantially.

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, the computers are

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many benefits, especially the application to

education environment

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the education environment

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, The Vietnamese Ministry of Education recommends to the government that national high school exam in 2021 should be organized on the computers in order to ensure transparency and accuracy in grading.

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, human can use the computers as

communication tool

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a communication tool

communication tools

by connecting social network like Facebook, Instagram or Weibo.

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means that people will have

chance

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a chance

the chance

to meet family through apps or make friend from different cultures and background. In conclusion, the computers has made our life

advantagous

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

and reduced

alot

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a lot

of manual tasks. As

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, I agree that the computer is the most important invention in the

last

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100 years.

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