In today’s society, both Western medicine and traditional, complementary forms of medicines are now widely known and used. The effectiveness oft kinds of treatment is determined by the patient's mental attitude towards it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In
modern era
Suggestion
the modern era
, Western
medicine
as well as alternative and conventional
medicine
have started to be used as widespread. The patient's emotional and mental behaviour towards various medical treatments is taken into account when evaluating the efficiency of these healing and reformative methods. In my opinion, in recent years the world has started to switch its direction from
Western style
Suggestion
the Western style
of medical treatments to former and traditional methods. The patient's mental reaction to
medicine
is equally important to its physical consequences. Alternative medication has become popular again in the
last
10 years. Some scientists argue that drugs which are mostly used in
delevoped
being changed over time so as to be e.g. stronger or more complete or more useful
developed
countries have some detrimental effects on human health. It is already known that they are merely reducing and curbing the symptoms but not healing the actual problem in the body.
Thus
, in many Eastern countries alternative approaches are
preffered
more desirable than another
preferred
over the other. There are several tests and
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
conducted by scientists and researchers. One of them is no doubt observing the mental behaviour after the foundation of a new medical drug. Some might have a variety of side effects on human psychology.
This
impacts
Suggestion
impact
cannot be clear until tests are carried out.
For example
, according to
Sunday Times
Suggestion
the Sunday Times
, a well-renowned
medicine which
Accept comma addition
medicine, which
has used for at least 50 years is proved to contribute problems with regard to the functioning of the brain. In conclusion, Western
medicine
is slowly leaving
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
place to traditional ways. Experts are making observations and tests for new medicines in order to see if there are any negative effects.
This
experiments
Suggestion
experiment
mostly focused on mental health. I believe that,
old methods
Suggestion
the old methods
are beneficial to our health. The most effective medicines are those who passed the experiments successfully.
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