IN MANY COUNTRIES ,THE AMOUNT OF CRIME INCREASING

Currently in many countries and states, the sum of

crime

has become increasing between youngsters and adults

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this

problem

and some solutions .

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view, there

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problem

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the financial situation

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reating new jobs for poor people .

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Nowadays, many

eople are sitting in the prison because of

crime

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he amount of crimes ar

e increasing f

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is increasing

aster than past years .

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he cause of it is gaps between poor and rich .

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One good illustration of

this

is that the people who are in dire need are bound to steal for their livelihood .

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Moreover, illegal

ctivities

such

as consumption of drugs have

also

contributed a lot in enhancing the

crime

level around the globe.

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the children who do not have parents or financial situation is poor ar

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are committing

have committed

crime

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In some case the parents are ca

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the cause

f the children to do a

crime

with their apathy .

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arents should control any activity of the children without pressure .

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However

, solutions are available to tackle

this

problem

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Firstly

, many companies have to create ne

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a new place

new places

o work for poor people .

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Moreover

the salary of the jobs have satisfy and it can help to eliminate the

crime

between people .

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he teenagers have to study where they would like to learn new knowledge .

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Furthermore

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there are many schools which cost so expensive for people who have a financial

problem

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therefore

schools have to discount the cost o

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