Some people think that professional athletes make good role models for young people, while others believe they don't Discuss both these points of views and give your own opinion

Nowadays,
sport
is one of the most developed
sector
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sectors
in terms of motivational videos and every person that has a
sportive
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sports
sporting
background admires professional players that sacrifice themselves for the team or for personal glory. Some people think that a
sportive
idol is a positive model, others think that they don't have a positive role in our mindsets. In
this
essay, I will discuss the two different points of view and I will give my personal opinion. On one hand, people in a
sportive
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sporting
sports
sport
situation think that professional athletes are normal persons that through dedication and
streght
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stretches
stretch
can achieve every task that they have in mind.
For example
, form every young child that starts to play football
to
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for
with
the old man that does some fitting exercises, everybody dreams to achieve their goals thanks to some healthy
sport
.  Overall, every
amatorial
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
material
athlete tries to emulate the preferred athlete for some healthy habit and
this
is admirable.
On the other hand
, the environment of professional
sport
is not always healthy. People that are against professional athletes as idols don't like doping, rough selections and broken dreams that frustrates the 99% of the
sport
population.
Although
, the most of semi professional athletes are not well paid and have no possibility to have a life full of wealth.
For example
, Basketball athletes of the national
second
category earn only 1000 euros and can't care of their family. In conclusion, I think that
sport
is a beautiful way of being motivated and is completely healthy for people that frequent it in a soft way.
Furthermore
, I think that a
sportive
life model is positive for everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Role model
  • Professional athlete
  • Positive influence
  • Work ethic
  • Charitable activities
  • Endorsement
  • Overcoming adversity
  • Misconduct
  • Overemphasis
  • Physical success
  • Unrealistic expectations
  • High-pressure
  • Media spotlight
  • Perceptions
  • Behavior
  • Inspiring
  • Diverse role models
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