Your sister has asked you to organize the music for her wedding at the end of next month. Write a letter to your best friend who is a musician. In your letter ● ask your friend to perform at the wedding ● describe why he/she would be suitable for this event ● explain how your friend will be compensated if they agree.

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Dear Joey, I am writing

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letter to tell you that my sister’s marriage is

at the end

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of the

upcoming

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month and she put all the responsibility for the arrangement of the music on my shoulders for it. Buddy, since you are my best friend and an amazing musician

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my acquaintances, I would love to invite you to perform at

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auspicious event. It will certainly create a stunning aroma if you sing Ed Shreen’s song “You Look Perfect Tonight”. I vividly remember your mesmerising voice when you sang “Blind Love” on my birthday

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year and honestly, it was so overwhelming to me.

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is the reason why I think you are the most suitable for

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occasion. Pal, I hope you will make a slot from your busy schedule for

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event, and if you send me your acceptance for it

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your charges, I will transfer it to your mobile number through the Cash app. Apart from that, not only will I pay for your travel expenses, but I

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have already planned your stay arrangements. I hope you will accept my invitation and can’t wait for your reply. Yours lovingly, Jacob

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coherence cohesion

To achieve a higher score, you could refine the transitions between paragraphs for an even smoother flow. Consider adding more concrete details about the event, such as the date, time, and location, to further enhance completeness.

task achievement

It is advisable to double-check for minor grammatical issues and word choices. For instance, 'aroma' could be replaced with 'atmosphere' to better match the context.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is very friendly and suitable for writing to a best friend, which meets the task achievement criteria well.

coherence cohesion

The logical structure of the letter is clear, with a greeting, body paragraphs covering all key points, and a closing.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

198 words

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