The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many people believe that the measurement of people’s
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is considered to be decreased in the future than nowadays. While I agree that people can gain benefits from the development of the medical
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, I
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disagree that many people depend too much on
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with, there are a variety of reasons why people can have benefited from the medical branch.
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of all, the pharmaceutical
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is growing day by day as it has many modern technologies that support doctors and
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to find the best cure.
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, new technologies
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as X-ray machines help doctors to look inside the victims' bodies to see internal injuries and new medicines
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as vaccines for HIV or Corona Virus.
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, doctors nowadays are highly skilled and have
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the medicinal
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is developing, some people still do not realize how significant their
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is.
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, several people have a low awareness and consciousness of their
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.
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, I have a roommate and he hardly has breakfast and lunch, and he never takes any physical exercise.
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of that, he always plays games and sleeps all day, he
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doesn’t have a healthy diet for himself as his
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food is noodles and he rarely eats vegetables.
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, numerous people are getting lazier because technology is so convenient today. A couple of reasons for
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is most adults only focus on making money and some people will have extra time at night, and when they get home, they just want to sleep or relax with TV or computers. In conclusion, I disagree that the standard of people’s physical condition is low as the pharmaceutical
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is growing.
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, I
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agree that to gain full benefits from the medical
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, people
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have to change their minds about protecting their
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • 1. Standard of health
  • 2. Average
  • 3. Lower
  • 4. Future
  • 5. Aging population
  • 6. Chronic diseases
  • 7. Sedentary lifestyle
  • 8. Lack of exercise
  • 9. Poor dietary habits
  • 10. Environmental pollution
  • 11. Technological advancements
  • 12. Impact on health
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