Some people think public library is necessary, however, others believe that the public library is useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

Recently there has been much interest in gaining a better understanding of the importance of public libraries in the contemporary world. Some people feel that the

library

is not worth

anymore

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,

however

, I agree with those who are of the opinion that the

library

is a crucial part of many society members. In

this

essay, I will explain the rationale for both viewpoints

as well as

adduce all the arguments which might support my own belief. Those who espouse the former opinion claim that

the

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libraries are a waste of public money. The proponents of

this

view maintain that all the materials

such

as books, magazines, and newspapers are available online and can be easily accessible via handheld gadgets.

As a result

, many of these

library

materials are just facilitated for the showcase purpose rather than someone using it and these costs an enormous amount of money. Maybe there is some truth in

this

claim, and some empirical evidence can be provided to support it.

For instance

, a 2007 study conducted by a team of researchers at the University of Toronto found that 80% of the libraries were closed in the USA because few people used to visit the

library

and the cost of running them was much higher than maintaining the public transportation.

Nevertheless

, one can argue that there is more to the story than

this

research tells. Personally, I firmly believe that

public

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library

in a town is a crucial place for many youth in the area.

In other words

, these students use

this

public service to focus on their studies because they get distracted at home

due to

technical devices namely TV, computer, and mobile phone. If these younger

generation

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visit to

library

for their education, they will be restricted

to use

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those technical

equipments

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.

Hence

, they will be able to focus on their studies. My friend, Tina, is a shining example of

this

. She used to get lower marks in the exam because she used to study at home

while

other members of her family were watching TV shows. One day, she decided to start leveraging

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library

, and before she knew it, she improved her academic performance in many subjects. In conclusion,

although

library

resources may cost the government to maintain,

nonetheless

, I still hold to the opinion that it is a valuable place for many adolescents to focus on their education.