One of your friends in a foreign country is starting an import-export business, and he has asked you to recommend a product from your country to him. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Say what product you want to recommend to him -Tell him/her where he/she can get this product -Explain why you want to recommend this product

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Dear James, Thanks for your letter after

such

a long time, and I hope you’re doing pretty well.

Firstly

, let me tell you how happy I am

hearing

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you running your new commercial business.

Secondly

, I’m writing in response to your letter regarding your request for my opinion, introducing an appropriate product that you could import from my country. Do you remember

last

year when you came here to visit me, I took you to

this

coffee house, and they’d served us some kind of tea? You drank it and enjoyed it a lot because of its high quality.

This

product is called Green Tea with beautiful packing and a reasonable price. I’ve thoroughly analysed

this

product and had found out that it’s produced here and not only its quality is guaranteed, but they considered an unbelievable trade discount for foreign customers for large quantities. I think it’s a big opportunity for you to make an order on their website www.GreenTea1.com. If you go online, you’ll face an option called foreign customer service. Click on it and fill up your information. In their privacy and policy, it is mentioned that after your application, they’ll call you in 2 or 3 business days. Need you any

further

information, I’ll be glad to help. I hope you make it. Best wishes, Sahand

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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6 paragraphs

220 words

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