The table below shows the population changes of several animal types from 1977 to 1990. summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The data provides information about the alternation of the number of wild animals through the period of 13 years starting from 1977.
Overall
, it is significant to note that all the species experienced a decline or even an
extinction, only Remove the article
apply
ostriches
doubled in existence.
In 1977, the sum of elephants comprised of
around 1500 compared to rhinos, which were just sevenfold smaller than the former. From that point there was a steady rise in the Change preposition
apply
quantity
of elephants and the other beasts, Change the quantifier
number
however
the first Add a comma
,however
one
and zebras recovered slightly during 1983. The giraffes represented Correct pronoun usage
ones
the
clear gradual decrease till the end of the period. Correct article usage
a
Furthermore
, there was a complete extinction of the rhinos after 1986. Interestingly, the sum of giraffes was half of the amount of the starting, which remains 2235
and Change preposition
at 2235
then
dropped to 1559. At
the Change preposition
In
end
the Add a comma
,end
amount
of zebras was much more than the other species including the quota of Change the quantifier
number
ostriches
.
It is worth to note
that the Change the verb form
noting
ostriches
are the single bodily, which revealed the increase in progeny. In the first 3 years
it declined slowly, Add a comma
,years
however
then
it increased to a record by
480.In the Change preposition
of
last
year
the total of Add a comma
,year
ostriches
dropped moderators from the highest point to 460.Submitted by nurlygul.khuantakh on
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