The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.

The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the
turtle
population
in India in the
time
period 1980-2012. Specifically, three types of
turtles
are described, namely:
Leatherback
Turtles
(19), Green Back
Turtles
(38), Olive Ridley
Turtles
(20)
as well as
all
species
combined (111). Numbers are reported relative to the 1980
population
size of each group.
Overall
, the
turtle
population
in India remained relatively constant over the
time
period when all
species
are considered. Olive Ridley
turtles
increased the most
while
Leatherback
turtles
showed the biggest decline between 1980 and 2012. From 1980 to 1982, numbers for all
species
showed a slight increase of up to 10%, but
then
levelled off again around the 100% mark with slight fluctuations.
However
, individual
turtle
species
showed considerable variations over
time
. Two
turtle
populations, the
Leatherback
and Green
Turtles
, declined between 1990 and 2012 after remaining relatively stable
initially
.
While
the Green
Turtle
decreased only slightly, finishing at 90% in 2012, the
numbers
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number
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of
Leatherback
Turtles
plummeted to less than 60% of the 1980
population
size over the same
time
period.
In contrast
, the number of Olive Ridley
Turtles
showed an
overall
increase. There was a steady rise up to 1997, after which
this
turtle
population
plateaued
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130% with minor fluctuations.

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