The graph below shows the population figures of different types of turtles in India between 1980 and 2012.
The line graph illustrates the changes in the
turtle
population
in India in the time
period 1980-2012. Specifically, three types of turtles
are described, namely: Leatherback
Turtles
(19), Green Back Turtles
(38), Olive Ridley Turtles
(20) as well as
all species
combined (111). Numbers are reported relative to the 1980 population
size of each group.
Overall
, the turtle
population
in India remained relatively constant over the time
period when all species
are considered. Olive Ridley turtles
increased the most while
Leatherback
turtles
showed the biggest decline between 1980 and 2012.
From 1980 to 1982, numbers for all species
showed a slight increase of up to 10%, but then
levelled off again around the 100% mark with slight fluctuations.
However
, individual turtle
species
showed considerable variations over time
. Two turtle
populations, the Leatherback
and Green Turtles
, declined between 1990 and 2012 after remaining relatively stable initially
. While
the Green Turtle
decreased only slightly, finishing at 90% in 2012, the numbers
of Fix the agreement mistake
number
Leatherback
Turtles
plummeted to less than 60% of the 1980 population
size over the same time
period.
In contrast
, the number of Olive Ridley Turtles
showed an overall
increase. There was a steady rise up to 1997, after which this
turtle
population
plateaued around
130% with minor fluctuations.Change preposition
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