Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and less on their working life. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In

this

modern world, it is observed by some politicians and health authorities that females are more capable of caring the necessity of children. In

this

context, it is advised that the mothers’ aim should be raising children

instead

of focusing on the career. I partially support

this

argument and

this

essay will highlight the key features of

this

statement.

First

of all, since the beginning of humanity, caring babies is under women’ responsibility.

Moreover

, due to gender equality in the work environment,

this

role has started to shift from women to men.

However

, the genetic background of men is based on hunting, which means “working” in the modern world, to care for the whole family.

Furthermore

, all babies have been fed with breast milk

first

2 years, because of that, it cements the bond between a mother and a baby,

also

it allows babies to listen only to their mothers.

Furthermore

, as per academic research published by WHO, it states that the children caring by only mothers are more successful throughout the educational life and

also

professional life.

That is

the solid reason why women’

first

preference should be raising a child

instead

of a career.

On the other hand

, in

this

contemporary world, the equality between genders has become a vital importance in order to increase efficiency and productivity in most of the industries.

In other words

, if only men involved in the business, the point of view of the process of the doing works always will maintain its position and it would avoid the improvement of innovation and profitability.

For instance

, if we focus on marketing sector, it could be clearly seen that women’s views and their selling strategies are unusual and accomplished. In spite of the fact that the majority of the

staffs

Suggestion

staff

in the marketing sector are men, the decision-makers are mainly women.

Also

, while half of the population is female, why should not they involve in a working environment? In conclusion, in the light of information given above, I agree that the women are entitled to

care

provide a cure for, make healthy again

cure

the child at least until children's school age, but

on the other hand

, it should not be forgotten that most of the developed countries’ prime minister are women and they have achieved significant achievements.