Countries with long average working hours are economically more successful than those countries which do not work long hours. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days success of e
conomical side
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the economical side
of countries related mostly to increasing numbers of hours that spent by employees in their jobs
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So some people think that more times at
work
lead to h
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higher
production r
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rates, then
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rates than than
then
successful of e
conomic
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economics
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while others believe that not v
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a very effective way
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essay will discuss both sides and will draw my personal conclusion
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On the one hand
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physical and mental problems associated with long working t
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time
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Tiredness and irritability with these recruits
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For example
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sleeping disorder
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insomnia
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depression and anxiety very common in these people. So
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that’s why some think that very harmful for human health.
On the other hand
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high production rates strongly connected with long hours at
work
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Recruits
work
all times to have a huge products to sell
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To illustrate
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many of pharmacy industries stuffs
work
for over time to increase providing of essential medical products and medications for the consumers
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Hence
the belief that extremely significant issue
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In addition
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great experience related w
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to
the above mentioned
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That means to b
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l
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a leader
the leader
leaders
w
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in
that field and have i
nformations
a message received and understood
information
and knowledge about how to deal with and accelerate their average of economic s
uccessful
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success
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For an instance
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petrol companies should provide gas and oils daily to produce energy for the country.
This
proves clearly that extremely significant for c
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country's
economics
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In conclusion
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after a careful analysis of both views
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I believe that working for long hours very important to have a huge experience and increase
work
outcomes
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I recommend to
work
more to have high income and knowledge that can open other opportunities
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