More and more people are reading news from the internet, but some of the people likes reading news from a newspaper. Do you agree or disagree.

Yeah I fully agree because when you read something you analyse much more better than those person who reading on the
internet
because
internet
provides you a less information while the
newspaper
provides a good information and authentic and whatever you rating on the
newspaper
it will remembering to you much more longer than when you read on the
internet
so I am completely agree that if more and more people are reading news from the
internet
ten sports person who are not reading from the
internet
have more memory compared to you are reading on the
internet
so I purposely believe that it is good to reading a
newspaper
from the local
newspaper
because it has very versatile link which and versatile topics in different types of topics news gathering in one single
newspaper
so we like and our our internal curiosity will increases.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • immediacy
  • sustainable
  • digital literacy
  • tactile experience
  • credibility
  • curated content
  • editorial oversight
  • information overload
  • investigative journalism
  • multimedia content
  • digital divide
  • niche interests
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