the pie charts below give information about world population in 1900 and 2000
The two pie charts illustrate the data of the populace of different areas around the globe between 1900 and 2000.
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Asia declined from 60% to 54%.
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Latin America’s proportion almost tripled in the same period. North America’s percentage, Linking Words
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