It is better for young people to get advice from old people than young ones. Do you agree or disagree?

When someone needs a guidance sometimes is better to take it from who lived more in ages or to someone
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Suggestion
with
ho is young, in my opinion a piece of
advice
is positive and depends on the situation to make it acceptable from old or young one.
First
of all, one word is more than say to someone what they should do or not in the situation the person is struggling,
however
to
give a go
Accept comma addition
however, to
od
advice
the person need to hear with an empty and without judgement who is asking for., sometimes you ask an
advice
to your mother who is old than you a
nd p
subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
ut more emotional influence to offer a word because she wants to protect you or she had already an experience about
this
subject, so you prefer to ask for your friend who has the same age as you.
Secondly
, advices sometimes came from a place which you never imagine,
for example
a magazine, a great book or simply from a talk with a stranger. Old people have hypothetically more experience and had lived more than young, so I agree, in some cases, they have a better suggestion like me when I was in doubt about who should I choose for my career , I had a
l
Accept space
,
ong conversation with my grandfather and he told me to follow my heart and to imagine something to do with pleasure and the money will come naturally like a river finds the ocean. To conclude, advices are part of life, everyone has a different one because of the personal experiences and the person who wants a help should know about that and think that sometimes people put some emotional or personal in that piece of
advice
.
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