As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom.

Computer
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The computer
is a great invention and there is no shadow of doubt that nowadays, people are using computers in a wide range for almost every activity and at every place for different purposes to make their work easy and faster. In the coming time, usage of
this
invention in modern society for education purpose will increase more as the technology is
itself upgrading
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itself, upgrading
day by day but it cannot helps students the way one teacher can help. I disagree with the statement that computers will replace by teachers. As people are constantly treading towards the digital media and in the education sector say school, colleges and universities are
also
taking proper help of computers for teaching students. Undoubtedly projectors and computers helps
in
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with
a wide
varieties
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variety
, to show presentation, and showing them things practically. But, it is
irrefutable fact
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an irrefutable fact
that without teachers teaching cannot be completed. To teach, to express, to make students understand and to understand problems of students, teachers are very important because machines
are fail
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fail
have failed
in doing so.
Further
, teachers are required in the learning process because they acknowledge some student’s deficiencies and help them to solve their problems by repeating the same explanation, giving extra exercises or even suggesting a private tutor. To support my viewpoint, another reason is the presence of a teacher is essential for students because the human contact influences them in positive ways.
Firstly
, students realise that they are not dealing with a
machine but
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machine, but
with a human being who deserves attention and respect. They
also
learn the importance of studying in
group
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a group
the group
groups
and respect other students, which helps them to improve their social skills On a
conclusion
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concluding
note, computers are very useful and have many
advantages but
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advantages, but
teaches
a person whose occupation is teaching
teachers
are still very important in
learning process
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the learning process
and it will continue in the future because no machine can replace the human interaction.

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