The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps illustrate the planned changes for the

centre

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of the town of Islip.

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, it is clear from maps the huge change will

be build

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a roadway around the

centre

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.

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, there will be other developments in housing and shops. The current map of Islip, the town

centre

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only consists of the main

road

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that runs stretches from east to west.

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the

second

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map shows

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proposed

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to change

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of the

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main roadway to

pedestrian

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a pedestrian

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road

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and

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built

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carriageway

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around the

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. Currently, the shops

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the north and to the south of the main

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.

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, the shops on the north side will be cancelled and Demolition

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to make space to build the car park, bus station, new housing area, and shopping

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. As for the southern area of the main roadway, the size of the park will shrink in the new Islip

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, where new housing will be built within the ring street.