An increasing number of professionals such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? what solutions can you suggest to deal with this problem?

One of the most daunting challanges facing
today's wo
take exception to
challenges
rld is many well-educated professionals
such
as doctors and teachers prefer to go to developed countries for a work
instead
of working in their own under-developed countries.
This
essay will examine the repercussions of
this
ever-growing phenomenon and will outline prcatical solution
s.
concerned with actual use or practice
practical
Going abroad of professionals for a work has numerous negative effects on the society; chief among them, the fact that it causes a noticeble slow dow
n in nati
capable or worthy of being perceived
noticeable
ons' growth and development owing to the fact that the cannot benefit from their knowledge.
This
causes going backwards as a nation, leading to becoming more poorer which creates vicious circle. Mo
re brain drain
Suggestion
a vicious circle
means more poverty, more poverty means more brain drain.
This
has been evidenced by countless academic studies the latest of which is one published by the University of India in 2017 concluding that, 75% of university graduates moved to Canada in
last
decades and c
ompanies are
Suggestion
the last decades
not able to find educated individuals for white collar positions. The study
further
founds that the economic growth has been decreased in connection with losing professionals.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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