The only way to improve safety in our road is to give sticker punishment for driving offenses to what extent do you agree or disagree?

increasing the rate of deaths caused by

traffic

accidents, many people believe that only implementing new stricter laws can

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the safe for commuters. In my opinion, I think there still

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several ways to improve that problem. On the one hand, granted that putting stricter punishment for driving

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can reduce the

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of transport issues.

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, drivers who run red lights or speed could pay a higher fine, and those found driving under

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of alcohol or drugs

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face a license suspension

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and even be sentenced to jail. These punitive measures may prevent unsafe situations, leading to fewer accidents.

On the other hand

, despite the benefit of severe regulations, I believe that still

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other methods to avoid

traffic

problems.

First,

the government need to pay attention to

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instructures

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for citizens to get better living standards, for

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, they must construct and rebuild roads, which are rough.

Moreover

, they can add more

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signs to stay away from blind spots,

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often happen accidents. Second,

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can be done by making driving

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harder : both written and driver

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so that only those knowing how to drive

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are allowed on the road. Not only that, every two years residents having driving

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need to take an

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test to reinforce their knowledge and access the new rules.

In addition

,some important places,

such

as

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,

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and

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, Which gather a lot of people might be moved to

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to ensure the far distance enough, leading to

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not only

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accident

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but

also

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conditions In conclusion, enforcing stricter punishments for driving

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might work to a certain degree, but

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mean that

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is the only way to solve

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matter. Other feasible measures include heightening citizen's awareness about the safety of driving and repairing road conditions,

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achieve better outcomes.