It is more important for a building to serve a purpose than to look beautiful. Architects shouldn’t worry about producing building as a work of art. Do you agree or disagree?

To serve a building for a reason is more
essentail
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
than to look attractive. Constructing
building
Suggestion
a building
as an artwork should not be stressed by architects.
This
essay does not agree with the more importance of serving constructions for a purpose than
appearence
Suggestion
appears
appearance
because of charming people’s attention and effects of urban areas to look stunning.
First
of all, Constructions are great landmarks to grab attention and they should look beautiful to attract people. In my opinion they have to be functional and attractive.
Thats
Suggestion
That's
why architects should design them well looked while erecting for other purposes.
For example
good-looking universities charm students to apply there
first
. It works
on
Suggestion
for
tourists as well. Guests of cities, search about the city
first
and
then
they find some interesting places to visit because of its
appearence
outward or visible aspect of a person or thing
appearance
. Most famous buildings
such
as
Eiffel Tower
Suggestion
the Eiffel Tower
, Statue of liberty, Buckingham Palace still make people flock to see them. Their great appearance
make
Suggestion
makes
their countries famous and attractive. When it comes to the urban areas, buildings add character to a city. And
also
nowadays architects design skyscrapers to make cities with modern atmosphere. Even aesthetically designed buildings have a commercial value. Towers, castles and palaces can be given as
example
Suggestion
an example
examples
. If the cities don’t have stunning buildings today, no one will want to visit.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • functionality
  • prioritize
  • building design
  • meet the needs
  • occupants
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • landmarks
  • symbolize
  • balance
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