Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material, post, TV, the Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the same benefits of attending college or university. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many people believe distance-learning programmes are way more effective, but there are some people who
denies
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deny
it. In
this
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essay, I agree that online programmes will not bring the same productivity than that of attending
college
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or university.
Now a days
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Nowadays
the online education system has emerged a lot and there are plenty of students who have welcomed the idea of studying at home;
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, the productivity and the benefits of them are not measurable to that of the students who attend classes at
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college
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the college
. They are more proactive as they meet their friends and professors in person, so that, the interactions between them have no barrier.
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, if one has to ask a doubt on the online platform, the professor will be able to address to only one person at a time. Imagine if multiple learners
has
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have
to raise the doubts at the same time, the platform would become noisy; neither the professor can address nor the students can raise doubts. While the education system in class will give space for every individual to raise their questions and it will be easy for the trainer to address those in a linear way.
Studing
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Studying
at
college
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or university creates a good environment for the learners to establish a
connection among
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connection, among
other batch mates and students of other courses as well. Whereas in distance-learning, the collaboration between the students are not that effective, as they cannot talk or chat before, during or after the session. Can the students be more attentive during online teaching? Possibly not, because the presence of the teacher in front of the students makes them more attentive and it helps them to collaborate and exchange ideas. People who learn
at
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in
college
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are
comparitively
in a relative manner; by comparison to something else
comparatively
healthy mentally as well as physically than that of the distance-learners, as they
involve
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are involved
in some physical activities like walking, cycling, getting some fresh air. Online education can
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be a good method for educating people across the globe, provided that, the above concerns are all rectified. To conclude, studying at
college
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or university is way more effective for
people which
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people, which
helps not only to learn, but
also
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to collaborate and connect with the fellow people.
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