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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that having an international
language
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 for all the countries could help to unite people and it lead to greater international understanding and co-operation.
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 essay agrees
to
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with
 the above statement and explains why it is very
crutial
of extreme importance; vital to the resolution of a crisis
crucial
 to have one
language
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 across all the countries. Almost every nation has one or more languages which are widely used by their countrymen. Languages were discovered to establish a communication between mankind, whereas, sign languages were used before
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 invention. In the modern world, communicating with people have become the vital source of sending and receiving
information
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 in our day to day life. Since people were following multiple linguistics in multiple nations, they were divided among themselves and there had no means of
information
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 exchange. While introducing an international
language
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 among all the nations, it established a collaboration mode
between
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among
 people; Even though few countrymen had opposed to the idea
, almost many people
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, almost as many people
 have appreciated it as it is for mankind's wellbeing. The importance of having an international
language
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 across the globe must be educated and appreciated by the mankind, as
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 is the only way to unite people globally for
making
engage in
doing
 a collaboration. Since English is the largest spoken
language
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,
Accept space
,
 it is selected as an international
language
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 and people use
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 for collaboration and exchanging
information
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.
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, there were a few patriotic protests happened in some countries,
majority
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the majority
 of the people understood its
importance and need and
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need and importance
 they have accepted
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 for the unity of human being. In some countries like China,
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 they use the Chinese
language
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 for all the manufacturing items' descriptions and product
information
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, they use English to collaborate with other countries, which shows the importance of having an international
language
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. To conclude,
this
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 essay argued why it is important to have an international
language
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 for all the countries and how it helps the people to communicate in
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 modern era.
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