You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false
information
. I read the complete article thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same.
However
, the
information
related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45
degree
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C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28
degree
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C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false
information
can adversely affect the tourism industry.
Moreover
, fake
information
can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown. I am humbly requesting you to correct the
information
and republish it in your future prints.
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to
this
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it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given
information
was false. I am looking forward to a quick resolution to
this
important matter. Yours faithfully
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Rectify
  • Misrepresentation
  • Tourism
  • Editor
  • Credibility
  • Accuracy
  • Local heritage
  • Fact-checking
  • Repercussions
  • Counteractive measures
  • Publishing ethics
  • Clarification
  • Factual error
  • Misconception
  • Authenticity
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