You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false
information
.
I read the complete article thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However
, the information
related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree
C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28 Change to a plural noun
degrees
degree
C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false Change to a plural noun
degrees
information
can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover
, fake information
can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown.
I am humbly requesting you to correct the information
and republish it in your future prints. In addition
to this
it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given Add a comma
,this
information
was false.
I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this
important matter.
Yours faithfullySubmitted by sameera4ever on
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