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Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility in the university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
Most people agree that the accessibility to
university
 is really crucial for both the poor and the rich in all societies.
This
 essay will explain the reasons why it is easy for the rich to obtain the higher qualifications, whereas it is quite difficult for the poor. Being born in a rich family has a lot of
advantages especially
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advantages, especially
 gaining access into a
university
 as the rich rarely have financial difficulties. Parents usually spend a huge amount of money to send their children to study in highly qualified educational institutions within or outside of the country. Rich parents
also
 plan and select schools for their children since early childhood
education
 until higher
education
 to prepare academic readiness for the child. Some of them even recruit private tutors or send their children to special tutorial schools in order to improve their children’s weaknesses, so they can meet
university
 admission requirement.
In contrast
, the poor have more difficulties to obtain
higher
Suggestion
a higher education degree
higher education degrees
education
 degree as it costs a large amount of money.
Most poor
Suggestion
Poorer
 teenagers
also
 have limited opportunities to acquire quality fundamental
education
 because of their family’s financial situation. Some of them have to work since they are young in order to earn more income to support their family
instead
 of focusing on their
study
Suggestion
studies
.
Although
 student loans are provided in the universities, they may not be able to pay for large debt after graduation if they cannot find a good job. As mentioned above, it is undeniable that the rich tend to have less difficulties than the poor to gain entry to
university
.
This
 disparity gap will be reduced, if the government provides more
education
 opportunities
such
 as scholarship and financial support for the poor.
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