Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat

Yesterday, I received your complaint letter about the noise issue on

last

Friday.

First

of all, I would like to apologise for the inconvenience caused. I had invited a few of our family friends to celebrate my wife 1st year work anniversary at our home. We had

this

plan in a hurry, so invited only limited people. We started late, which has ended little longer than expected. I understand that

this

would've caused inconvenience to some extent because our kids and friends' children met after a long time, so they were playing around and making noise with no rest. We have tried our best to control them, but we never realised that it could disturb as they were playing in the

last

room which has good insulation of sound. We would like to thank for your understanding and sorry for

this

issue. We will not let

this

happen again, especially late night with kids around. We will always want to be a good relationship with you as a neighbour and we will make arrangements in the future without causing any problems for you with prior notice and acceptance.

Wed Apr 29 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

2 paragraphs

188 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat

Include an introduction and conclusion

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