Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether teachers play the most key role

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pupils or parents do is a controversial debate among people. While there are some valid reason for

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the importance

of teachers, I deeply believe that parents have major and leading role

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children through school period. Needless to say, in order to have high efficacy in education, schoolboys and schoolgirls must presume their tutors are of

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importance that nobody is. Teachers are well trained through their courses in university to have positive interconnection and dominant interpersonal relations with schoolchildren;

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and most crucial task of teachers is to exert profound and significant influence.

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, in deprived families, tutors appeal more to student than parents since these families suffer from malfunctioned relationships and weak family ties. Based on aforementioned in previous lines, it is logical to anticipate more influence of teachers than parents. On the flip side, due to public imagination, parents are assumed either the

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or the most important child’s role model not only in education period but

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throughout their life. From Infancy to commencing formal education, children spend all of their time in

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the charming atmosphere

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of family and form an emotional attachment, so it is not down to earth to envisage ripping

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a resilient band.¬ Apart from

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the most important duty of a schoolchild is attending classroom, doing homework, and chase educational instructions, which in all mentioned tasks he/she can feel sensible attendance of teachers,

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the majority

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of pupil’s time elapse beside their fathers and mothers yet; as a direct result, parents keep their impressive position. In summation, in spite of the fact we cannot neglect

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penetration of teacher in pupil’s life, it seems vividly obvious to me that the status of parents is of

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a seniority which nobody can occupy it.