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Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you discovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: where and when you lost your bag what your bag looks like what its contents were

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Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to report the loss of my
grip
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baggage
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 while my trip to London from Vancouver through one of your
flight
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last
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 week on
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 week Wednesday. Since it was a midnight arrival; I slept and I would have forgotten my
grip
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 luggage. To be precise; I kept my
grip
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baggage
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 in an over-head
baggage
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 storage compartment respective to seat number E22; flight number was AK 702 and the date I travelled was 26 April 2020. My
grip
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baggage
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's brand is Samsonite, black
colour
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 and 24inch sized. I have my name tag tied to it with my name Chandra mention of it. Listed here with items I carried in my bag; a brown GAP branded jacket, a book titled ‘Win the world’ a
gift wrapped
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 transformers toy for my son and 3 Cadbury chocolate packets. I have enclosed my flight ticket for you to verify
my
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 details I have mentioned above. My contact details are
in
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departure
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the departure
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 ticket. I request you to kindly do the needful. Yours sincerely, Chandra

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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