Organized tour to remote community and other countries is increasingly popular. Is it a positive or negative development for the local people and environment?

The past few years have witnessed the burgeoning growth of organized tours to secluded parts of the world. From my perspective,

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the locals and the environmental quality. The ever-increasing popularity of package tours to rural areas offers definite perks. Regarding the locals, they can enjoy the amelioration in the living standard. To achieve an increment in tourist arrivals and cater

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the growing demand of incoming

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, more entertainment facilities and transport infrastructure within these locations are often established and improved.

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easier access to better amenities can bring more joy and make lives less difficult in remote areas. As for the environment,

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for lush and verdant space when it comes to what countryside or

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retreats has to offer.

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, more trees would be planted and the air quality would

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be significantly improved.

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be certain negative impacts brought by

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mode of tourism may give rise to environmental degradation. Organized tours often bring a massive number of

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to remote and previously unspoilt areas.

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can be explained by a significant amount of water and air pollution as environmentally unconscious

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may throw litter or spit on the streets.

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,

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be held accountable for causing enormous disturbance to the

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of locals. Intrigued by the exotic way of living that they hardly encounter in their daily life, some

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may give themselves the autonomy to interfere with local residents’

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as freely going into their houses to explore

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or asking too many questions surrounding their private lives. In conclusion, both beneficial and detrimental effects on local people and the environment can be seen

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of the rise in trips to distant regions.