The chart below shows the annual number of rentals and sales( in various formats) of film from a particular store between 2002 and 2011. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart shows changes in the annual
number
of rentals
/sales
(VHS,DVD
,Blu-ray
and rentals
) of films between 2002 and 2011.
Overall
, DVD
sales
and rentals
are the one
that remained throughout the ten years. Change the noun form
ones
However
, VHS sales
were present in the four-first years to disappear afterwards and give way to Blu-Ray
sales
in the last
four years.
The annual number
of rentals
decreased gradually over the ten-years
period from almost 170,000 to 60,000. Correct your spelling
ten-year
In contrast
, the number
of DVD
sales
peaked in 2007 at nearly 225,000 , before falling back to 175,000 at the end
of the period.
Concerning VHS
Correct article usage
the VHS
sales
rate, it reached its maximum at the number
of 75,000 in 2002, they went down to totally disappear in 2006. One year later, Blu-Ray
sales
had arisen to keep slightly growing until 2011 at the number
of 10,000.
Moreover
, the annual number
of DVD
sales
was the highest comparing
to other various formats of rents and Change the form of the verb
compared
sales
. Yet, Blu-Ray
sales
were the lowest.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, rentals, sales, dvd, blu-ray with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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