Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?

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In recent times, convenience

food

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went viral

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many people think of it as advantageous

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admittedly it is a cost effective, convenient option.

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, my position is that fast

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risks outweigh its benefits,

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Firstly due

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Firstly, due

to its contribution to major health problems,

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and more importantly though, the psychological impacts are considered

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become worse or disintegrate

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. Various studies had proven the correlation between fast

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consumption based diet and cardiovascular diseases,

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, high blood cholesterol levels, which is stated as a major risk factor of blood clotting,

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death.

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, several studies, including a study that took a place in the faculty of medicine at New York University came up with a striking fact that

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form of eating habits enjoys influences on our mental health by

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increasing in quantity or value

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the risks of bipolar and depression disorders. by way of conclusion , I would like to restate my position , that fast unhealthy

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is detrimental in several ways , and we should all retain healthy diet benifits our bodies , minds and souls

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Obesity epidemic
Processed foods
Nutritional value
Chronic diseases
Cultural homogenization
Lifestyle changes
Economic impact
Job creation
Environmental degradation
Sustainability
Dietary habits
Consumerism
Mass production
Public health
Health-conscious

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Fast food is now universally in most countries and is becoming increasingly popular. Some feel that this is a positive trend, while others do not. What are your opinions in this?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays , there is more and more competiton for getting university . Is this positive or negative development ?

in some cities, people are choosing cars instead of bicycles, while in other cities riding bikes is which development do you think is better?replacing cars. why is this the case?

Building underground transport systems (subways) is the best way to deal with traffic problems in cities.

The best way for a government to prepare for the future is to invest in young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?