You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you in regards due to some problems with the shuttle services for the past fortnight. I usually will take the 7 a.m. but at Greenpoint Junction to Westmount Avenue every
weekdays
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. For the past 2
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the bus
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arriving late by 5 to 10 minutes and
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is affecting my morning routine and causing me to reach my workplace late. Due to
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many passengers are unable to find a seat on the bus and
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make
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my ride very uncomfortable due to overcrowding. I am working on an important project currently because of
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I arrived late to work and was unable to complete
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work hours and
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make me have to stay and leave the office late. I would like to suggest an idea to your company to frequent your shuttle services time particular on weekdays during the peak hours to ease the passenger travel journey. Another idea I would suggest is to bring a double-decker bus so that they will be plenty of seats for the passenger and
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will able them to have a comfortable journey.
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